Inside a lonely flower :
wake up!
today is the day.......... we will be leaving home...
..... but I don't wanna go....
petal no5 : but you have to leave ....
pollen : but why?
flower : OK be ready next wind wave....
petal no 5 : because everybody leaves this place after some time.....
we remains.....till one day sun burns our skin.... and we die out of thirst
pollen : what bout us..........
petal no 5 : I don't know!! no body knows....
wind blows taking some pollens in the sky...
pollen : oooooooooo !! bye bye petal no. 5.....
taken away bye wind..........
enjoying the 1st ride..finally out of the home....and finally flower can be seen from the top.......its beautiful..........
pollen : ooooooooo!! Iam inside human nose....
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakhiiiiiiiiiiiii (sneeze)
out he flows again........
................hit the floor........
ant auntie(cheeti auntie with her 2 sons) :....... pollen...... hmmmmmm too small..not worthed ..not so tasty too....but lets see If we didn't find food today... we have to eat this ...take this pollen...........
..........old grasshopper lying....with broken legs...unable to crawl....
ant auntie : food...leave this poor pollen here...... and call other ants... we have a feast tonight....................
ssssssssssssssshshssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
..wind blows.......... pollens journey starts again........
still.......pollen don't know whats his destination .........
still......pollen don't know what it is worthed for ....
still..... pollen don't know whats he is send for.....
still........... pollen don't know whats this life for......
may be some fine day...he lands up on another flower.....sacrificing his existence.....and then that flower becomes fruit........... fruits have seeds in it.........another fine day those seeds hits fertile ground..... giving rise to another plant.which produces another flower....and that flower again nurtures..... lots of pollen sons.......
@#$@#%#$^%$%^&%^&^%*%&*&^*^&(^*(&*(&*(&$%^$&%^&%^&%^7#$%#$%#$^$%&^%^&%*#$@#$@%#$%$#^$
back to reality....
we are all like that pollen ................ only some make it ......only few knows the ultimate reality........the truth.....only few are able to answer this intriguing question " wHATS tHIS lIFE foR "
rest.... are lost in the winds ..forever.....
which pollen r u?????
7 comments:
bahut hi gajab relation nikala hai sirrr... achca laga padd karr... yaar apney blog ka prachaar karo yaar... b4 dat write a few more... skoool, college n ur other lyf ke fundey waley xperiences!!!!... tcre.. dhaval
WOnders!!!
hum wo pollen hai jo duniya pe raaj karegi!!!!
jo dikha degi ki hawaa ka ek jhoka use uda nahi sakta!!!! jise koi cheetie auntie kha nahi sakti!!!!hum wo pollen hai jo ban sakta hai pollens ka shehnsha ; ).....
dekho bhai .............duniya ka sabse bada sach yeh hai ki tum kahin bhi chale jao ! Place aur position kabhi matter nahi karti ! Yeh waqy ko jab marna hota hai tab woh humko maar hi deta hai !
Yaar bahut hi gazab ka likha hai tumne...maza aagaya...hume laga ki poora farji hoga..but end me to kaafi senti mauhol kheech liya tumne!
mast hai yar.
A text that means a lot, surely, Maybe Dan Sir we would have even managed well without that last paragraph, a reader, made to think what the text stands for, everyone identyifying himself with that pollen grain!
it reminds me of those short stories which when read again and again could always give a new meaning,
wonder, truly!
thanx guys!!
for giving ur version of Mr . pollen... this story was all about interpretation...
# dhaval .. thanx! for appreciation & suggestion !!
#indrajoy : gr8 attitude..keep it up!!
it was 10/10 types answer of ques:"which pollen r u?"
#gaurav :hmmm!! different angle all together...is baat per 1 sher arz hai " waqt ka duhan chaaya hai.." remember that....seriously
very deep thought behind this comment....gud...do visit regularly...
#farhan : shukria!! taariffon key pull bandney key liye....civil engg. ban rahey ho pull bandna to aana hi chahiye.....kyun bhai..
#ankur :Thanx man!I said I am not a gud writer .. ankur..I consider my readers as children(having pure heart)..many readers needs spoon feeding.... thats not thier weakness....thats mine....Iam still a learner....
solution >> copy paste and delete the last para.and then read.....hahahaha
thanx again!! gud suggestions r always welcome!!!
I really like this thought!!
thanks 4 sharing!
:)
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